Talk:Heretek

Becoming a Heretek

There are three problems in one part of the paragraph, "Most Tech-Priests who are thusly lead to a certain amount of self-reliance and forced adaptation will find that it strengthens their dedication to the Omnissian faith. But some few Tech-Priests will instead start to question, to seek their own answers and rely on innovation to overcome adversity." Now Firstly you can't start a sentence with the word "But" and Secondly "Tech-Priests who are thusly lead to a certain" I think a word or more is missing from that part because it doesn't make sense and Thirdly "thusly" isn't 'a word as far as I know'. I suggest "Most Tech-Priests who are assigned there find it leads to a certain amount...etc" but I don't know if that changes what the line is meant to say, right now it makes no sense to me so I don't want to change it. OmegaXicor 18:06, 3 January 2013 (CET)