Talk:World Engine

The writing on this page needs a bit of work, the main problems being-

• "The World Engine was a large space cargo carrying a whole Necrons Tomb World." - I assume this is meant to mean the POPULATION of a tomb world not the world itself.
• "Reasons remain unknown, and all plans to teleport in Terminators were abandonded after losing two squads that flew off in space immediately." - reasons for what remain unknown? needs re-written in a clearer style; "two squads that flew off in space immediately" - phrased terribly, needs re-phrased.

I'd do it myself, but Im a bit busy atm and dont have the source material to use as a reference. Anyone who fancies re-writting it will recieve psychic hugs. The Lemur 20:25, 27 February 2012 (CET)