Talk:Ordo Chronos

The lead paragraph of this page is very confusing. The lead of an article should give the reader a brief summary of the content - this page opens with a reference to another Ordo that isn't explained. "The Ordo Chronos are one of the smaller sub-branches of the Inquisition with few amongst the Ordo Calixis having heard of it and even fewer even possessing any knowledge as to their purpose.", what is the Ordo Calixis? We dont even know what the Ordo Chronos is yet. I dont have the source materials, so I cant fix the article myself - but it should begin with something like "The Ordo Chronos are one of the smaller sub-branches of the Inquisition that study warp stuff" or whatever it is that they do. The Lemur 11:25, 13 March 2012 (CET)

The term "Ordo is ambiguous: It refers to local branches of the Inquisition (Ordo Calixis -> Calixis-Sector), which are mainly strategic and bureaucratic entities, and it refers to the "real" ordi which employ Inquisitors. Such an "inquisitorial sector-command" consists of Inquisitors from many different ordi. --DetlefK 15:03, 13 March 2012 (CET)

Yup, I know the background - I was talking about the structure of this article. The article needs work - the lead paragraph has to explain what the page is about, I dont feel it does so in it's current form. The Lemur 05:31, 15 March 2012 (CET)

Probably still need a bit of work.--Ashendant 12:22, 15 March 2012 (CET)